Other than the odd creases at the bottom, I like this.
It’s a cool pattern — it reminds me, in a favorable way, of leafing through the photos in my mother’s old needlepoint book, looking at all the funky stitches people did on their elaborate projects, blissfully unaware that attempting the same would be an expensive enterprise because the canvases are WHOA, and then there’s the yarn, and then getting it MADE into something… suddenly trading that hobby for, say, pilot training, seems like a huge savings. And this completes your latest peek into the dark recesses of my nerd side. My point: I like it, but maybe it’s because it brings up fond memories, and not on its own merits. But I suspect it’s both.
Seriously, the Titanic went down on an iceberg smaller than those.